Anything in particular you are looking for in the feedback?
Not knowing what the original looked like, the conversion to b&w seems OK.
Assuming that the subject is the building in the center, I would crop it tighter to remove all the stuff in all four corners as they don't seem to be adding to the photo.
Hi, nothing in particular really just playing around with some edits and would like some advice or comments.
I will uplaod the original, I have cropped it a little and darkend the rooftop is this more effective would you say?
Thanks appreciate it alot!
I like it. Perhaps as ManicJoe said: a tighter crop.
Having seen the original, I made a version that is more high key to keep the impression of heat.
Done with curves to lift the blacks and then steepen the curve to bring out more contrast across the ground and roof.
Thanks Euan, Ill give that a play around.
Really appreciate it.
You are most welcome.
There's no one answer to these asthetics 🙂
Feel free to post some more efforts for us to enjoy.
So people don't have to download the image you have attached to your post please Edit your post to remove the Attached screen shot and Include it in the body of the text of your post.
You do that by Clicking the "More..." link at the bottom of your post, Selecting "Edit Message" and then use the "Insert Photos" icon in the tool bar at the top of the Post/Reply/Edit dialog box like this.
Awesome thanks for the tips!