Color correction: Better but still dark. Now what?

[keithm1972]

I've watched hours of color correcting videos and have made a little progress improving my raw footage, but the main things bugging me after my correction efforts are:

1. Still too dark.
2. Too saturated.

I guess both of those are kind of tied to shooting on a dark stage with lots of colored lights. Any suggestions based on the before & after pics below (Lumetri turned on/off)?

Monitor = BenQ PD2705Q

 

[Ann Bens]

@R Neil Haugen