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1. It looks like you tried to scrub the logo off of the laptop cover, but didn't do a very good job of it. I also think the white balance could be warmed up just a bit.
2. The horizontal elements aren't quite level, and the muffins in the foreground are out of focus.
Hi @Dirk - Pro Pictures , I agree with @Jill_C that you could do a better job cloning out the laptop logo and the smudge near the top of the laptop but I also see that there are sensor / dust spots in the window to the right of your model.
In the other image, the sensor / dust spots are in the window to the left of your model. Although the muffins are out of focus, I don't think that is as much of a concern because your model is in very clear focus.
Looks like you had a fun model to work with. Great photos.
Good luck with your resubmissions.
Hi @Dirk - Pro Pictures ,
Nice composition and also are the subjects, and the stories your photos tell. A picture like that of the cupcake would be suitable for a billboard promotion of a pastry shop except the main subject, the cupcake is out of focus.
To promote cupcakes and how delicious they are you need to both the cupcake and the model in good focus. Additionally both photos have white balance issue. They are too cool. You need to also remove the entire logo from the laptop and leave the cover plain.
yes thanks for the help. In the meantime I know, that the cupcakes must be in focus for a good using 😞
Next time...... 😉
Yes the model has some very good emotional faces.
thanks to all, the re-submission worked fine.