It is my first publication to sell and they did not accept it for lack of quality, and more, I need to know specifically.
Its kind of hard to understand what's going on here. So I agree with the reviewer. Is this suppose to be a zombie? Or a serious injury? If so you may wanna rework this guy's facial expressions. I mean you are not going to look like you're chilling if your in pain or something. Besides I think a good description and key words are not enough in this situation.