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Errores en la fotografia

Community Beginner ,
May 09, 2023 May 09, 2023

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Hola, me gustaria saber cuales son los errores de las siguientes fotografias. 

gracias Harbor.JPGDSC_2452.JPGDSC_2313.JPGDSC_5402.JPGDSC_8394.JPG

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Community Expert ,
May 09, 2023 May 09, 2023

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 8394 - not sharply focused, and you would need model releases for all of the recognizable people.

2142 - the bird, which was your intended focal point, is not in sharp focus.

Harbor - very underexposed, and you would need to remove the identifying marks on the ship.

5401 - blurry, overexposed sky, and you owuld need to remove identifing marks on every boat!

2449 - bird is not in sharp focus and should have been cropped tighter

 

Jill C., Forum Volunteer

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Community Beginner ,
May 10, 2023 May 10, 2023

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Thnak you!!

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May 09, 2023 May 09, 2023

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8394: in addition to what @Jill_C says: You would get an IP strike with logos and businesses shown like this.

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The exposure is also faulty, as shown by the histogram,

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and you have sensor dust:

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2142: The picture is missing blacks (left).

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That has a consequence on the contrast.

Harbor: In addition to the boat names and identifiers, look also for logos on the building, like here:

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5401: This one needs tweaking for exposure and noise. I am not convinced that it is blurry or that the sky is overexposed, but it has indeed massively identifiers, that all would need to go.

2449: nice picture but with the focus somewhere in the blossom in front of the bird. The exposure is way off.

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The framing is not that good. As the bird looks to the left, you should have more space to the left.

ABAMBO | Hard- and Software Engineer | Photographer

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Community Beginner ,
May 10, 2023 May 10, 2023

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Thank you, really helpful.

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May 11, 2023 May 11, 2023

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You're welcome.

ABAMBO | Hard- and Software Engineer | Photographer

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Community Expert ,
May 09, 2023 May 09, 2023

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Your colors are on the drab side. 

After adding a levels or curves adjustment, consider boosting the color vibrance.  

I like the images but they need more wow factor.  Particuarly the birds & flowers.

 

Hope that helps.

 

 

Nancy O'Shea— Product User, Community Expert & Moderator
Alt-Web Design & Publishing ~ Web : Print : Graphics : Media

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