feedback on my work if possible

[Thomas cerisy]

Hi everyone, it's my first attempt to sell stock illustration so obviously it's been rejected ☺️ Which is absolutely fine, but I don't really know if it's because of the easthetic, the subject, both or something else

if anyone had any feedback so I could work on it, it would be greatly appreciated 

thank you

Thomas

[jacquelingphoto2017]

Hi @Thomas cerisy ,

Your drawing are beautiful, except there are a few discrepancies that would make them not suitable for stock. For illustration, take a look at the edge of your zoomed signature. The edge is smooth.

Now take a look at the edges of your zoomed artwork. The edges are jagged.

Also the lines of the outer edges are not continuous. I am assuming they are not vector arts. Vector arts are flexible and can be expanded to whatever size the customers desires.

Also please note, signatures are not allowed on works submitted as stock. 

Always zoom at 100% to inspect your work for flaws.

Best wishes

JG

Photographer and Nutrition Author

[Thomas cerisy]

Hi, thank you for the feedback! Really instructive and helpfull ☺️ I will fix these and hopefully next time they will be accepted 🤞🤞

[jacquelingphoto2017]

You re welcome @Thomas cerisy