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Hello, good, could someone help me understand where the error is?

Community Beginner ,
Jan 26, 2022 Jan 26, 2022

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Community Expert , Jan 26, 2022 Jan 26, 2022

Hello,

One problem for me is your white balance. It's too yellow. You have to correct for indoor lighting. I'm also unsure about your cropping and composition; I think it could be framed better.

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Community Expert ,
Jan 26, 2022 Jan 26, 2022

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Hello,

One problem for me is your white balance. It's too yellow. You have to correct for indoor lighting. I'm also unsure about your cropping and composition; I think it could be framed better.

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Jan 26, 2022 Jan 26, 2022

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thanks i tried what you say and now it looks better than before

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Community Expert ,
Jan 27, 2022 Jan 27, 2022

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Maybe it looks better now, but it is not enough. All in all, your main subject is not standing out enough, the fork has a strong reflection, there is noise, the picture tilts to the right and the framing has not improved.  There is also a focussing problem.               

ABAMBO | Hard- and Software Engineer | Photographer

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Jan 27, 2022 Jan 27, 2022

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Thank you very much I will try all your advice thank you very much for answering

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Jan 28, 2022 Jan 28, 2022

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You're welcome.

ABAMBO | Hard- and Software Engineer | Photographer

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Jan 27, 2022 Jan 27, 2022

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I also think framing is the problem. The horizon is also not level. More depth of field would be better.

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