Interesting photo! It does have some technical issues though. I would have expected more of the room to be in focus as the general room seems to be the focal point. The white balance is too yellow. There is a person sitting in one of the windows that appears slightly distorted. On the right side of the photo, the vertical line of the white divider could use some straightening.
I hope that helps 🙂
Thank you very much for your time.
There are also IP issues, such as branding over the door.
Thank you .
It's a cluttered, not sharply focused composition and you've got recognizable signage and a recognizable person. If it had not been rejected for technical issues it would have been rejected for IP issues if you did not supply a model release and a property release.