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Community Beginner ,
Aug 16, 2022 Aug 16, 2022

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Several photos were rejected. But I am particularly interested in only one of them. Please help me understand my mistakes.

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Community Expert ,
Aug 16, 2022 Aug 16, 2022

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Interesting photo!  It does have some technical issues though.  I would have expected more of the room to be in focus as the general room seems to be the focal point.  The white balance is too yellow.  There is a person sitting in one of the windows that appears slightly distorted.  On the right side of the photo, the vertical line of the white divider could use some straightening.

 

I hope that helps 🙂

 


George F, Fine Art Landscape Photographer

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Community Beginner ,
Aug 16, 2022 Aug 16, 2022

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Thank you very much for your time.

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Aug 17, 2022 Aug 17, 2022

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This light is much better. Thank you.

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LEGEND ,
Aug 16, 2022 Aug 16, 2022

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There are also IP issues, such as branding over the door. 

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Community Beginner ,
Aug 16, 2022 Aug 16, 2022

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Thank you .

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Community Expert ,
Aug 16, 2022 Aug 16, 2022

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It's a cluttered, not sharply focused composition and you've got recognizable signage and a recognizable person. If it had not been rejected for technical issues it would have been rejected for IP issues if you did not supply a model release and a property release.

Jill C., Forum Volunteer

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Thank you.

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