Help me understand the problem!

[Olga24185113mzvr]

Several photos were rejected. But I am particularly interested in only one of them. Please help me understand my mistakes.

[George_F]

Interesting photo!  It does have some technical issues though.  I would have expected more of the room to be in focus as the general room seems to be the focal point.  The white balance is too yellow.  There is a person sitting in one of the windows that appears slightly distorted.  On the right side of the photo, the vertical line of the white divider could use some straightening.

I hope that helps 🙂

[Olga24185113mzvr]

Thank you very much for your time.

[Olga24185113mzvr]

This light is much better. Thank you.

[Test Screen Name]

There are also IP issues, such as branding over the door. 

[Olga24185113mzvr]

Thank you .

[Jill_C]

It's a cluttered, not sharply focused composition and you've got recognizable signage and a recognizable person. If it had not been rejected for technical issues it would have been rejected for IP issues if you did not supply a model release and a property release.

[Olga24185113mzvr]

Thank you.