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Help with raster illustration. What is wrong?

Community Beginner ,
Feb 12, 2023 Feb 12, 2023

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Hi, I need your assistance, please. I have questions about issues with my illustrations in Photoshop. The reasons of rejection are poor quality and so on in the list. I just don't understand that is wrong with those. Will be grateful for your help and constructive advice.02_3_14.jpg08_3_14.jpg

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Feb 12, 2023 Feb 12, 2023

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Hello,

Not sure about the first one, but your mouse - should the colour of the curtains be outside the borders?

08_3_14borders.jpg

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Feb 12, 2023 Feb 12, 2023

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Yes. But it doesn't seem to work the way I wanted. If you didn't like it. Thank you

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Feb 12, 2023 Feb 12, 2023

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Also regarding the mouse image, Adobe specifically states that we should not add text to our images, per this help page:

https://helpx.adobe.com/stock/contributor/help/editing-dos-and-dont.html

Don’t: Add text or watermarks to your image.

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Feb 12, 2023 Feb 12, 2023

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Thank you, I didn't read this information

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Feb 12, 2023 Feb 12, 2023

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Mouse:

The text is disturbing.

And you are mixing styles: scattered lined with clean lines.

Your clean-up is done badly:

Abambo_0-1676230413586.png

Abambo_1-1676230593182.png

 

Your black lines are not black.

Looks like you created these by scanning, leaving your helper lines on the drawing.

 

Raven: you mix different styles and that looks like an error:

Abambo_2-1676231099221.png

The blurred and the focussed textured brushes don't work well together.

 

ABAMBO | Hard- and Software Engineer | Photographer

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Thank you

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You're welcome.

 

Incidentally: I like your illustrations, even if you mix styles. But the styles mixing (besides the “bad” scanning) does make the pictures not really usable.

 

I think that the mouse, with some clean-up and a correct black point, passes.

ABAMBO | Hard- and Software Engineer | Photographer

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