Help with raster illustration. What is wrong?

[Natali27121772ob5b]

Hi, I need your assistance, please. I have questions about issues with my illustrations in Photoshop. The reasons of rejection are poor quality and so on in the list. I just don't understand that is wrong with those. Will be grateful for your help and constructive advice.

[ricky336]

Hello,

Not sure about the first one, but your mouse - should the colour of the curtains be outside the borders?

[Natali27121772ob5b]

Yes. But it doesn't seem to work the way I wanted. If you didn't like it. Thank you

[Jill_C]

Also regarding the mouse image, Adobe specifically states that we should not add text to our images, per this help page:

https://helpx.adobe.com/stock/contributor/help/editing-dos-and-dont.html

Don’t: Add text or watermarks to your image.

[Natali27121772ob5b]

Thank you, I didn't read this information

[Abambo]

Mouse:

The text is disturbing.

And you are mixing styles: scattered lined with clean lines.

Your clean-up is done badly:

Your black lines are not black.

Looks like you created these by scanning, leaving your helper lines on the drawing.

Raven: you mix different styles and that looks like an error:

The blurred and the focussed textured brushes don't work well together.

[Natali27121772ob5b]

Thank you

[Abambo]

You're welcome.

Incidentally: I like your illustrations, even if you mix styles. But the styles mixing (besides the “bad” scanning) does make the pictures not really usable.

I think that the mouse, with some clean-up and a correct black point, passes.