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No encuentro el problema con esta foto.

Community Beginner ,
Nov 23, 2022 Nov 23, 2022

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Buenas tardes, podrian ayudarme a ver el problema en esta foto por favor? Fue rechazada por problemas tecnicos sin embargo no veo la falla. El enfoque lo hice a la graza y a mi parecer esta enfocada. 

Gracias. 

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Community Expert , Nov 23, 2022 Nov 23, 2022

Hello,

Yep, the image is too dark as @John PDX has pointed out, so you have to lighten it a bit more.

See the histogram:

Screenshot 2022-11-24 081938.png

Notice how it shows the image is more on the dark side. In this case, you need to balance out the histogram more. You also need a bit more contrast, so increase the whites and blacks a bit.

Another thing is you have to balance out the white balance. It is a bit too green - so try to reduce the greenness. As the water is green, it has given a green cast to the image; the bird'

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Participant ,
Nov 23, 2022 Nov 23, 2022

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Hi, I think it's too dark.  I'd suggest increasing the overall exposure while at the same time pulling down the highlights.  If you don't pull down the highlights they will be blown out.  It's also reallly green but that may be an accurate reflection of the scene.  Lastly, I would have cropped it a little differently.  The bird is too high and to the right for my taste.  Below is an example after I made some adjustments to the exposure.  Best regards, John

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Community Beginner ,
Nov 23, 2022 Nov 23, 2022

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Muchas gracias, tomare en cuenta sus sugerencias para corregir la foto.

Saludos!

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Community Expert ,
Nov 23, 2022 Nov 23, 2022

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Hi @PATRICIA DURA25107432v9kx ,

There's chromatic noise under the bird.

jacquelingphoto2017_0-1669257502470.png

I think you went in a little too close on the subject or you could have up you f-stop a stop or two more. Some edge are a bit soft.

There seem to be a slight motion blur at the head of the subject.

 

jacquelingphoto2017_0-1669258221794.png

 

Best wishes

Jacquelin

 

 

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Community Beginner ,
Nov 23, 2022 Nov 23, 2022

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Agradezco su amable respuesta! Intentare hacer los ajustes sugeridos a la imagen.

Gracias!

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Nov 23, 2022 Nov 23, 2022

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la posibilidad de que la sombra del árbol sobre el agua se considere
una imagen desenfocada

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Community Expert ,
Nov 23, 2022 Nov 23, 2022

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Your photo has to little blacks and whites. It is mostly midtones which make it look flat. It needs to be lightened up a little. The highlights on the birds back are overexposed. Also, the photo needs to be sharpened.

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Community Expert ,
Nov 23, 2022 Nov 23, 2022

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Hello,

Yep, the image is too dark as @John PDX has pointed out, so you have to lighten it a bit more.

See the histogram:

Screenshot 2022-11-24 081938.png

Notice how it shows the image is more on the dark side. In this case, you need to balance out the histogram more. You also need a bit more contrast, so increase the whites and blacks a bit.

Another thing is you have to balance out the white balance. It is a bit too green - so try to reduce the greenness. As the water is green, it has given a green cast to the image; the bird's feathers have taken on a green cast.

Be careful though not to lighten the bird's feathers too much to avoid overexposure.

 

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Nov 24, 2022 Nov 24, 2022

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When you correct the exposure, you will get colour noise. That needs to be corrected. Add some structure (Texture, Clarity) and a light sharpening, and you can consider a resubmit. If you work with RAW, that should be an easy workflow.

ABAMBO | Hard- and Software Engineer | Photographer

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