Apart from the focus & lighting issues, the composition is sterile. It lacks warmth or wow factor. It might work better with improved lighting and people in the frame to give it some life.
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The vertical elements are leaning and should be straightened. The focus seems to be soft. I would expect to be able to read at least part of the labels in the closest shelves.