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Refused for technical reasons.

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Jul 13, 2023 Jul 13, 2023

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Hello community. Refused for technical reasons. Thanks everyone for the advice in advance.

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Jul 13, 2023 Jul 13, 2023

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I think there are some sharpness issues towards the back, some of the shrubs are lacking detail in spots, and there is a halo along the top of the mountain.

 

I also wonder about the composition.  It seems this wouldn't work well as a background, and there also isn't a clearly defined subject from my perspective.

 

I hope that helps!


George F, Fine Art Landscape Photographer

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Jul 13, 2023 Jul 13, 2023

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The entire image has soft focus - foreground, mid ground and background.

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Jul 13, 2023 Jul 13, 2023

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I feel that the colour balance is slightly on the yellow side, so you need to make minor adjustments to that.

As for composition, this could be improved quite a lot. What is the actual subject? The bush in the foreground is in the way!

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Jul 14, 2023 Jul 14, 2023

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The sharpness needs to be increased and you have a white halo that can be seen at >300%.

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Jul 14, 2023 Jul 14, 2023

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There is a small exposure error:

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There is chromatic aberration:

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And there is this troubling halo. And yes, there is a problem with the fine details. Both problems may well be because you over processed denoising and sharpening.

ABAMBO | Hard- and Software Engineer | Photographer

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