Rejected due to technical issues

[AdamoB838]

Hi can I please get some feedback. 

[Jill_C]

Unfortunately, focus on the eye of the bird is too soft. I can see from the effect of the splashing water that your shutter speed was perhaps too slow to capture a moving bird sharply.

[AdamoB838]

Thanks for the feedback.

[jacquelingphoto2017]

Hi @AdamoB838 ,

The white balance do not seem correct. Also the picture has noise/grains. Those are in addition to being out of focus.

Best wishes

JG

Photographer and Nutrition Author

[AdamoB838]

Thanks for the feedback. 

[RALPH_L]

hello @AdamoB838 , you definitely need to do some sharpening. I would also remove the disturbing twigs and unnatural rock on the left side. I would also soften the water.