In addition to @Ralph Lear 's analysis:
Portrait shoots needs to have the eyes crisp sharp. If at all, somewhere in the body area seams to be the focus point. In addition to be noisy, I also thought to see postprocessing artifacts probably due to noise cancellation algorithms or fake DoF.
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