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What are the technical issues in this photo? It was rejected like others with the same concept. Help

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Sep 06, 2021 Sep 06, 2021

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I reviewed all reasons about a photo is rejected with tecnical issues and I don't know this photo has been rejected.

 

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Community Expert , Sep 06, 2021 Sep 06, 2021

Composition wise, I think that Pepto-Bismol / Pink Bismuth background must go, there's way too much of it.  Food photography is challenging enough without a pink bismuth background.  😉

 

Also it's unclear what you're selling.  There are no other elements in the image for perspective so I don't know if this is a jumbo sized bread boule or a bite sized cookie.  In any case whatever IT is has color fringing around the edges.

 

Better luck next time.

 

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Community Expert , Sep 06, 2021 Sep 06, 2021

Hi @BROTEstudio ,

There is either a problem with white balance or you have pink reflecting from somewhere. The pastry should all be golden brown, but instead some places are pink. That is the technical issue.

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Also you need to utilize all that negative space. Your subject is the pastry. Utilize the space with the pastry. I like the pink background. It is o'kay if you can avoid it spilling onto the food. 

 

Best wishes

JG

Photographer and Nutrition Author

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Composition wise, I think that Pepto-Bismol / Pink Bismuth background must go, there's way too much of it.  Food photography is challenging enough without a pink bismuth background.  😉

 

Also it's unclear what you're selling.  There are no other elements in the image for perspective so I don't know if this is a jumbo sized bread boule or a bite sized cookie.  In any case whatever IT is has color fringing around the edges.

 

Better luck next time.

 

Nancy O'Shea— Product User, Community Expert & Moderator
Alt-Web Design & Publishing ~ Web : Print : Graphics : Media

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In addition to Nancy's comments, I would add that if you're going to feature just a single element, it should be a perfect example. I'm not sure what kind of cookie (or bread roll) this is, but it's not perfect...

Jill C., Forum Volunteer

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Hi @BROTEstudio ,

There is either a problem with white balance or you have pink reflecting from somewhere. The pastry should all be golden brown, but instead some places are pink. That is the technical issue.

jacquelingphoto2017_1-1630974735584.png

 

Also you need to utilize all that negative space. Your subject is the pastry. Utilize the space with the pastry. I like the pink background. It is o'kay if you can avoid it spilling onto the food. 

 

Best wishes

JG

Photographer and Nutrition Author

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Thank all of you for your comments. I'll consider them in my future work.

Kind regards.

 

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You are welcome @BROTEstudio 

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Hello,

I too think that the pink background should go. It does not suit the subject matter. Is this biscuit/roll sweet or savoury?

Think more about the kind of background that can match the type of food you want to photograph!

Composition is wrong as well!

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