I need help getting feedback for my course assignment on a homepage?

[TiffanyWeir33]

I have an assignment that requires me to receive feedback from others on the internet. I will explain a bit about the design brief: So a client decides to name his website The Bag Lady, which is a business that markets towards young women (around in their 20s) and the products are selling handmade bags. I understand that the title of the website does seem to be a bit offensive to others and there are some spelling/grammar errors. I am from Australia, so the words are spelt differently to the American version, which I do apologise. Any comments/suggestions/feedback will be very helpful to me to improve the areas that is required for the final version. The link is down below. If you have any questions, feel free to ask.

https://sta.sh/21ezwu1dpxqq

[99jon]

#2 looks best to me. Less wordy and more social.

[TiffanyWeir33]

Both #1 and #2 are together, I couldn't take a snapshot of the whole page, sorry about that.

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[Ussnorway]

#2 will flow better on different screen sizes so i'd go with that mate

[Leslie Moak Murray]

I love the name! Keep it! I saved the images and viewed them in Photoshop as one, to get a better idea. I think it looks easy to navigate, and I like the bright colors. As to the wording, it might be better to say "Each bag .. is unique" rather than "are" unique. I also like the logo with the heart handle.