App release on playbook - platformer/side scroller
Hello everyone,
I have just released my first game on playbook, it is 100% my creation made after hours and weekends. I am looking to get some feedback on anything and everything, be honest! I'm tired of my non-programmer friends generic "yeah it's good"
Although this is a trial run of sorts, I listed it paid for now at $0.99, it currently has 16 levels and 1 world (more worlds to come)
There is no free version, no advertising what so ever, so I am not surprised downloads are very low so far. There is one review, but I have a sneaking suspicion it's from a friend.
Please give me some feedback on the website and demo video, or if you want to spare 0.99 go for it!
(links and names removed from this thread for SEO reasons, the domain and app are new to the world and no one knows it exists yet!)
I feel it needs more levels and graphics to compete on apple/android, and I read a "proper launch" is kind of a big deal on apple. It doesn't have much comparable's on playbook, so I let it go there first. I also really like the playbook![]()
Thanks to everyone on this forum, I learned a lot here and am looking forward to some suggestions!

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