Contributor critique

[LarryDC55]

Is this possible for a stock image

[Jill_C]

It's a bit underexposed and blurry.

[LarryDC55]

So everything in the shot needs to be in focus ,was trying not to focus on the parachuters but the flag ,got it thanks

[Abambo]

No, not everything, but it needs to be consistent. 

[reedesign1912 · Accepted solution]

Hi @LarryDC55 , you also have a few sensor / dust spots on the right side of the image (bottom right corner and just above the flag on the right.) 

[Ricky336 · Accepted solution]

Hello,

Overall, the image is rather underexposed. You also have light fall-off, meaning the edges are darker - vignetting. This should be corrected in post-processing.

[Abambo]

Look at your histogram, it shows that the picture is highly under exposed:

The sharpness could be OK, but there is chromatic aberration and those spots need to be addressed.

And I fear that you would need a model release from the two persons in the picture.