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hello everyone, I just started creating photos on the site, can you see if this is suitable?

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Aug 06, 2023 Aug 06, 2023

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hello everyone, I just started creating photos on the site, can you see if this is suitable?

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Community Expert , Aug 06, 2023 Aug 06, 2023

The first photo is too dark, thge white balance is off and the phone and trademark belong to Apple.  You cannot use it without a release.

 

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Community Expert , Aug 06, 2023 Aug 06, 2023

DSC0342.jpg - blurry and not well lit 

DSC0394.jpg  - blur  and chromatic aberration 

DSC0346.jpg - blurry, noisy,  not well lit 

DSC0363.jpg - noise, poorly lit 

 

 

 

 

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The first photo is too dark, thge white balance is off and the phone and trademark belong to Apple.  You cannot use it without a release.

 

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In addition to @RALPH_L's great advice, the direct lighting is causing the light to appear uneven and leaving some harsh shadows, and one of the gems is cut off in the frame. 

 

The paper background in the other photos is distracting, and I think the depth of field is too shallow in most shots, leaving the subject out of focus.

 

Good luck with your future submissions!


George F, Fine Art Landscape Photographer

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DSC0342.jpg - blurry and not well lit 

DSC0394.jpg  - blur  and chromatic aberration 

DSC0346.jpg - blurry, noisy,  not well lit 

DSC0363.jpg - noise, poorly lit 

 

 

 

 

Jill C., Forum Volunteer

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