Even without hearing it, I can tell you that what is mostly likely to be missing is two things: A suitable microphone, and a treated acoustic space to record in (could be a vocal booth, could even be one of those special screens designed to do the job). Without a sympathetic space around the mic, you will pick up a lot of the room sound, and that's really what you don't want. Even a less-than-ideal microphone will sound better in a treated space... so as well as posting a sample, can you tell us about how you're recording this - often some quite simple things can make a big improvement.

Hi Deborah,

Please help us by posting a sample so we can hear the issue 🙂