for review

I left some comments.

Please take these as constructive criticism. On the whole, your work could be improved if you:

• improve your typography knowledge and control.
• learn to use underlying layout grids and how to visually create connections between groups of content. The grid informs the content, and the content informs the grid.
• execute with precision.
• feel for space is quite good, but undirected, inconsistent, and uncontrolled.
• have a reason for every single design decision and element that is added or removed. Design with intent. Avoid adding in anything that is visual fluff, or "because I felt it needed it". Your feeling is correct - but avoid placing or removing stuff without good reason. You should be able to provide a justification for everything you do in your design: if someone asks you "why did you use those colours" or "why did you place that element there" you should be able to readily answer these.
  Approach each design as a problem statement that requires a clear answer with solid argumentation.

In short, you seem to mostly design by "feeling" your way around, in my opinion. At the moment --looking at your other work-- your potential and design work is stymied by a lack of control and limited rational design thinking.

If you instill some of that in your work, you will level up your design work to the next level and beyond!