Project Evaluation

Good morning everyone! 

I'm a third-year student working on a final project in South Africa. For my final projects integrated campaign, we have met the halfway mark, we have completed all research, conceptualization, chosen deliverables, branding and visual style.  Part of this project we are required to get an evaluation from those in industry. So I was hoping if anyone is keen to take a look through the pdf I've attached below and want give any feedback i would really appreciate it. 

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