No offence intended, but you obviously do not really understand how pattern tiles have to be constructed in order to work correctly as pattern swatches.
Ton and Doug have already pointed out the most important thing about pattern tiles (precise matching).
My recommendation for you is to do some exercises with very simple pattern tiles (circles, semi-circles, simple line constructions etc.). Just to get an understanding how pattern tiles actually work.
Your sample certainly needs some advanced knowledge of Illustrator's pattern mechanisms. Perhaps a bit too complex for newcomers.