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Roseline, you are very brave asking for feedback in so public a forum. I'm actually uncomfortable about providing some of it, but you did ask.
Dotty Dot. 'Then there _were_ two dots'.
The background gradient made it difficult for me to scan the lowest two lines, and the transition occurred before I'd done so. All the slide transitions were too fast for me. Perhaps if I'd been able to scan the page more easily, but even then, I think too fast.
Some of the colour combinations in Words Colour Pictures grated a bit for me. I'd be inclined to add a wee warning for those poor people liable to fit.
Best of Words worked better. Best of Care is on the screen for less than a second.
Words of Colour has better colour combinations (IMHO) but the timings are all over the place.
I couldn't parse this page for the life of me. My brain wanted to read it as 'The Colour of by Words'. I am thinking of some of those geometric layout shapes like the Golden Spiral, and/or a progression where the words get smaller in the order they should be read, but leave your name full size. The thing with layout is it can be difficult to put it into words. We have a feel for what works learned over many years of doing it, and it won't necessarily conform to the rule of thirds, or Golden thingie. At least it's easy to change our minds and experiment nowadays. That was not the case when we used to cut stuff out with a scalpel, and paste onto a sheet of paper.
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