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Dirk - Pro Pictures
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March 25, 2022
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abgelehnt wegen technischer Probleme....

  • March 25, 2022
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Hi,

 

ich hätte 2 Fotos, die wegen technischer Probleme abgelehnt wurden. Habe aber keine Idee, was da technisch ungenügend ist. Hat jemand von euch eine Idee?

Bin noch recht neu hier, lerne also gerne dazu.

 

LG

Dirk

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Correct answer Jill_C

1. It looks like you tried to scrub the logo off of the laptop cover, but didn't do a very good job of it. I also think the white balance could be warmed up just a bit.

2. The horizontal elements aren't quite level, and the muffins in the foreground are out of focus.

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Dirk - Pro PicturesAuthor
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March 29, 2022

Hi,

thanks to all, the re-submission worked fine.

 

Dirk

    jacquelingphoto2017
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    jacquelingphoto2017Community Expert
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    March 29, 2022

    Congratulation @Dirk - Pro Pictures 

    jacquelingphoto2017
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    jacquelingphoto2017Community Expert
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    March 25, 2022

    Hi @Dirk - Pro Pictures ,

    Nice composition and also are the subjects, and the stories your photos tell. A picture like that of the cupcake would be suitable for a billboard promotion of a pastry shop except the main subject, the cupcake is out of focus. 

    To promote cupcakes and how delicious they are you need to both the cupcake and the model in good focus. Additionally both photos have white balance issue. They are too cool. You need to also remove the entire logo from the laptop and leave the cover plain.

    Best wishes

    Jacquelin

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      Dirk - Pro PicturesAuthor
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      March 26, 2022

      Hi Jacquelin,

      yes thanks for the help. In the meantime I know, that the cupcakes must be in focus for a good using 😞
      Next time...... 😉
      Yes the model has some very good emotional faces.

       

      Thanks

      Dirk

        reedesign1912
        reedesign1912
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        March 25, 2022

        Hi @Dirk - Pro Pictures , I agree with @Jill_C that you could do a better job cloning out the laptop logo and the smudge near the top of the laptop but I also see that there are sensor / dust spots in the window to the right of your model.

         

        In the other image, the sensor / dust spots are in the window to the left of your model.  Although the muffins are out of focus, I don't think that is as much of a concern because your model is in very clear focus.

         

        Looks like you had a fun model to work with.  Great photos.

         

        Good luck with your resubmissions.

        Rob R, Photographer
          Jill_C
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          Jill_CCommunity ExpertCorrect answer
          Community Expert
          March 25, 2022

          1. It looks like you tried to scrub the logo off of the laptop cover, but didn't do a very good job of it. I also think the white balance could be warmed up just a bit.

          2. The horizontal elements aren't quite level, and the muffins in the foreground are out of focus.

          Jill C., Forum Volunteer
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