Hello! The reason for the rejection of the photo, can it be corrected? I will wait for any criticism

Before submitting, compare your work with current Stock Inventory. 

Stock may have too many of those assets on hand.  Ideally, your work should be unique in some way.

To be accepted & sell, it should be as good or better than what Stock has.  Read these links.

• https://helpx.adobe.com/stock/contributor/help/reasons-for-content-rejection.html
• https://helpx.adobe.com/stock/contributor/help/quality-and-technical-issues.html
• https://helpx.adobe.com/stock/contributor/user-guide.html/stock/contributor/help/photography-illustrations.ug.html
• https://helpx.adobe.com/stock/how-to/tips-stock-image-acceptance.html
• https://helpx.adobe.com/stock/contributor/help/vector-requirements.html

@Jill_C told you what is wrong with your assets.

1+2 are out of focus, 3 has noise and is underexposed as shown in the histogram:

4 is noisy, over processed and out of focus.

Focussing problems can't be corrected.