The first file has a white balance issue. It has a blue cast. The edge of the file is jagged when zoomed in. The focus is not sharp in the eyes. There is an issue with one of the back leg.
The children's hands of the the third picture looks odd.
The fourth picture, the hand in the forefront being blurred, I see that as an issue. The display is part of the focused subject. The lady should be more in focus and so should be her hand due to the entire display being in focus.
There's chromatic noise around the edge of the laptop of the fifth image.
And about that "magic mirror issues." That whole thing can probably be removed. Following corrections, I think the image stands up well on it's own and it leaves space for copy.
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