Newbie needing critique on rejected images

Hi @Canada Pictures ,

The first photo is too dark in the shadows. The depth of field seem a bit shallow and there is chromatic noise visible in the top right corner.

The second image is not completely in focus and it has color fringing on the edges.

Third subject is blurry.

The fourth image is blurry and under exposed. There's also an IP issue. You need to take out the initials.

Best wishes

Jacquelin