1731033151434 (2).jpg - underexposed, and don't add vignettes, which are not allowed by Adobe. The customer can add a vignette if they desire, but can't remove one.
1739977720665 (1).jpg - foreground is underexposed. It would be best to shoot 2 images, ine fire the foreground and ine fir the sky and blend them in a composite.
Regarding the plane, you can't just blur the logos and markings, you have to completely edit them out.
I only looked at the first photo. You need to clean your camera!. There are alot of sensor spots that need to be removed from the photo. Also, the photo is somewhat underexposed and the shadows need to be lightened up. Your horrizon line is not level. You have too puch foreground which takes the focus away from the plane. Your horrizon should be one third up from the bottom. Yes the name of the plane must be removed. Not blurred. It must be removed.