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June 12, 2023
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rechazado una serie completa

  • June 12, 2023
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Hola.

Me han rechazado una serie completa de dos sesiones diferente, lo currioso es que todas las fotos revisadas ese mismo día fueron rechazadas. Querria saber el motivo exacto para poder corregirlo ya que es la segunda parte de las sesiones, la primera parte la subí el año pasado y no pude ningún problema.

 

Saludos y gracias   

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Abambo
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June 13, 2023

The first has a noise issue and is slightly underexposed.

I agree with Jacquelin on the white balance issue.

Your second also has a small white balance issue. The main problem here is the black clipping.

 

When doing portraits, I'm not for overly correcting all things, but I think, you should really correct pickles.

(that's not a refusal reason, however).

ABAMBO | Hard- and Software Engineer | Photographer
Ricky336
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Community Expert
June 13, 2023

Hello,

In my view, you should correct the white balance in all of the photos. The skin tone is wrong. There is a green cast to all 5 photos. The skin colour looks somewhat green.

E.g.

 Something like this might be better:

 

Jill_C
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June 13, 2023

In addition to the technical issue noted by @jacquelingphoto2017 you would also have needed signed model releases for each person in the frame.

Jill C., Forum Volunteer
Jill_C
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June 13, 2023

GabrielTrujillo_Manifestacio 2023_179.JPG - the entire sign and hands should have been in focus. Depth of field too shallow here.

Jill C., Forum Volunteer
jacquelingphoto2017
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June 12, 2023

Hi @Gabriel Trujillo Tf,

The first file has a slight green white balance issue. Correct that and you should be good.

I'm not sure what is the issue with the second one. The hair comes across as being grainy, but I don't see it in the dark area. You could probably take down the highlight a bit, not much. 

The third file also has a white balance issue.

There is a halo around the edge of the man's shirt sleeve in the fourth file. I believe you could have included more depth of field to include the second row of people since their plaque card formed part of the subject.

Details are lost in the shadows of the fifth file and also there is a motion blur.

Best wishes

Jacquelin