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June 24, 2021
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Rejected due to technical issues

  • June 24, 2021
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Hi can I please get some feedback. 

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RALPH_L
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Community Expert
June 25, 2021

hello @AdamoB838 , you definitely need to do some sharpening. I would also remove the disturbing twigs and unnatural rock on the left side. I would also soften the water.

 

 

jacquelingphoto2017
Community Expert
Community Expert
June 25, 2021

Hi @AdamoB838 ,

The white balance do not seem correct. Also the picture has noise/grains. Those are in addition to being out of focus.

Best wishes

JG

Photographer and Nutrition Author

AdamoB838Author
Participant
June 25, 2021

Thanks for the feedback. 

Jill_C
Community Expert
Community Expert
June 24, 2021

Unfortunately, focus on the eye of the bird is too soft. I can see from the effect of the splashing water that your shutter speed was perhaps too slow to capture a moving bird sharply.

Jill C., Forum Volunteer
AdamoB838Author
Participant
June 24, 2021
Thanks for the feedback.