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January 16, 2019
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Rejected for "out of focus"

  • January 16, 2019
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I submitted 5 images, similar subject but distinctly different. 4 or 5 rejected for "out of focus."
These are macro shots with shallow depth of field, but main point of focus is clearly in focus.
(Image was also shot at F11, on tripod, with remote shutter). This image is one that would be used for backgrounds, etc.

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Suggestions are appreciated. thanks

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Correct answer Ricky336

I think for a shot like this you need all parts in focus and sharp - the edges are clearly out of focus,

Therefore the 'out of focus' reason, but I think here it is to do with depth of field. Did you use a rather large aperture?

I don't think the moderator was being over critical. I think all parts should be sharp and clear.

So, I would use a smaller aperture to increase your depth of field. You said you used F11, so try a bit higher. Maybe take a series at different apertures to get the 'one'. The 100mm at macro will give a narrow DOF.

Also, try and include the whole image and not cut off the straws on the right.

By the way - you very clearly mentioned that you uploaded the pic without the watermark.

Great use of the colours.

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PepeCastro
Inspiring
March 4, 2022

In order for this photo to be completely focused, you will need to do a focus stacking, which consists of taking several shots with different approaches to the object and later putting them together in photoshop, for this you must do them with a tripod and lighting that is not variable, you only have You have to change the focus point from the farthest part to the closest, to do this you must do the manual focus, a mobile device is not useful, you have to do it with a reflex or a mirrorless one.

PepeCastro
Inspiring
March 4, 2022

Para que esta foto te quede completamente enfocada vas a nesecitar hacer un focus stacking , que consiste en  hacer varias tomas con diferntes enfoques del objeto  y posteriormente  juntarlas en photoshop, para ello debes hacerlas con un tripode y una iluminacion  que no sea variable, solo tienes que cambiar el punto de enfoque desde la parte mas alejada hasta la mas cercana, para hacer esto debes hacer el enfoque manual, no te sirve un dispositivo movil tienes que hacerlo con una reflex o una sin espejo. 

Ricky336
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Ricky336Community ExpertCorrect answer
Community Expert
January 17, 2019

I think for a shot like this you need all parts in focus and sharp - the edges are clearly out of focus,

Therefore the 'out of focus' reason, but I think here it is to do with depth of field. Did you use a rather large aperture?

I don't think the moderator was being over critical. I think all parts should be sharp and clear.

So, I would use a smaller aperture to increase your depth of field. You said you used F11, so try a bit higher. Maybe take a series at different apertures to get the 'one'. The 100mm at macro will give a narrow DOF.

Also, try and include the whole image and not cut off the straws on the right.

By the way - you very clearly mentioned that you uploaded the pic without the watermark.

Great use of the colours.

Abambo
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Community Expert
January 16, 2019

I do not see your pictures? Would you mind to post them here? Use the image icon to insert an image. To start with, one of your images would be enough.

ABAMBO | Hard- and Software Engineer | Photographer
Inspiring
January 16, 2019

Edit

Not watermarked on the submission for stock.

joanH
Inspiring
January 16, 2019

Hello CinBrandon, I am certain Abambo will reply to your photo posting.

I am an illustrator and see the work as delightful because of form and color. There are a few bits out of focus, not much. Some of the bits are very strong and seem somehow edged with white which makes them stand out as even sharper than the others in the background. Perhaps the contrast between front and back is a problem too. Stay tuned for Abambo, I am curious what he will say too. Best regards, JH