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January 13, 2023
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却下の理由

  • January 13, 2023
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初めて写真をいくつかアップしましたがどれも審査に落ちました。よければ改善点を教えてほしいです。

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Jill_C
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Community Expert
January 13, 2023

1. Lack of contrast, soft focus 

2. overexposed, soft focus, ip issues 

3. Blown highlights, could be cropped closer to eliminate some of the blownout area in the background. Depth of field is too shallow causing most of the image to be out of focus.

4. IP issues with the people and signs. Leaning verticals, not centered, edges cropped off. perhaps a bit over saturated.

 

Jill C., Forum Volunteer
Abambo
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Community Expert
January 13, 2023

Your third picture has a focussing issue: only the very first plate is in focus, and that plate is cut. I would have laid the focus on the second plate and augmented the DOF. 

 

The histogram shows blacks are missing.

 

Your fourth picture has a framing issue. As the building is symmetric, your picture should reflect that. The people need a model release and the temple probably a property release. It may also be that signs need to get edited out. I do not read Chinese (?), so I can't judge that.

 

The picture also needs to get levelled.

ABAMBO | Hard- and Software Engineer | Photographer
RALPH_L
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Community Expert
January 13, 2023

I only looked at the first two photos. Were they taken with your telephone? There is quite a bit of noise. There are also IP issues. Signs, logos, building names need releases.