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西中拓史
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May 17, 2023
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品質の問題により1枚も審査を通らないので助言を頂きたいです。

  • May 17, 2023
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はじめまして。

今月から写真の投稿を初めまして、全て「品質の問題」で却下されています。

Lightroomでノイズ軽減をかけて上げ直しても却下になってしまうので、具体的にどこを直した方がいいのか意見を頂きたいです。

その他、審査に通りやすい方法があれば教えて頂きたいです。よろしくお願いします。

 

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Correct answer Jill_C

TAK07873.jpg - some of the whites are overexposed, perhaps even blownout

TAK01491.jpg - depth of field is too shallow and the tire is not in focus 

TAK08885.jpg - this would have earned an IP rejection due to the company name and logo on the ribbon 

 

 

 

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Abambo
Community Expert
Community Expert
May 17, 2023

TAK07873.jpg is correctly exposed, however, your noise reduction introduced artefacts.

TAK01491.jpg: The focus is indeed not good and the DOF is too tight, but you also have an exposure problem. The picture is overexposed.

TAK08885.jpg: "La maison du chocolat" is the name of a company, and the graphic is their logo. That's a clear IP violation.

As for the quality issues: you have noise (in the shadows), the white balance is incorrect, there is chromatic aberration. Due to the plate geometry, I would have cropped the image as a square.

 

 

 

ABAMBO | Hard- and Software Engineer | Photographer
西中拓史
Participant
May 18, 2023

ありがとうございます!参考にさせていただきます。

Jill_C
Community Expert
Jill_CCommunity ExpertCorrect answer
Community Expert
May 17, 2023

TAK07873.jpg - some of the whites are overexposed, perhaps even blownout

TAK01491.jpg - depth of field is too shallow and the tire is not in focus 

TAK08885.jpg - this would have earned an IP rejection due to the company name and logo on the ribbon 

 

 

 

Jill C., Forum Volunteer
西中拓史
Participant
May 17, 2023

ありがとうございます!参考にさせていただきます。

RALPH_L
Community Expert
Community Expert
May 17, 2023

Photo1: Depth of field is too shallow and the lower left corner should be cropped out.

Photo2: Overexposed and the upper right corner should be cropped out. The photo is not level.

Photo 3: Photo is not level and the partial flower on the left edge should be removed and the I would remove the partial ribbon on the top right edge.

西中拓史
Participant
May 17, 2023

ありがとう!参考にします。