How should I edit this photo?

Hi everyone,

I've taken a shot during my vacation, I like the composition but the light hadn't been great...

I'm trying to fix the issue of the light by editing it in Lightroom but it looks a little bit oversaturated and not realistic...

How should I edit it? 

You can see the unedited as attachment bellow, the link for my edited version is that one here: https://adobe.ly/3zIP4PS

Thanks!

Jan Tillert