Sorry the instructions were not clear. Basically avoid paths with colons in them. Avoid putting tags onto handles in layers, instead put the tags onto the layers directly. So in Left Eye I think you have a handle which you added the Left Pupil tag. That is why it is saying ".../Left Eye:Left Pupil". Delete that handle. Then select the Left Pupil layer and add the Left Pupil tag (in the property panel to the right). You should see the path now as ".../Left Eye/Left Pupil". The slash instead of a colon is important.
Note I noticed Left Eye I think was not tagged but Right Eye was. I would make sure both layers are correctly tagged.
You might also like to put the "Head" tag on the "Body" layer. Sometimes it likes to know the hierarchy and only looks for things under the relevant parent (e.g. only looks for pupils under an eye, so if it fails to find the eye, it will fail to find the pupil).