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December 21, 2024
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Minion Pro in-line italics and use of punctuation punctuation

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Hello,

I'm setting a one-page print document, in Minion Pro defining an organization's mission and vision. The last section lists the organization's core values. The subhead, "Our values" is in small caps, and below it, each value (one word) is italicized, followed by a brief description in roman. Is there any agreed-upon convention included or excluding punctuation (ie. period or colon), after the italicized word? I typically like  consulting the Bringhurst book, but didn't see anything there.

 

Example:

 

Excellence. We strive for relevance, innovation and diversity in programming, while recognizing people as basic forces of change and improvement.

or 

Excellence We strive for relevance, innovation and diversity in programming, while recognizing people as basic forces of change and improvement.

 

Thank you much.

Andrew

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Dave Creamer of IDEAS
Community Expert
Community Expert
December 21, 2024

I believe the Chicago Manual of Style would italicise the punctuation following the word. I don't think the second example would be correct as it reads poorly. If you did use punctuation, such as a colon, it would be italicised and the "We" would not be capitalized. 

 

David Creamer: Community Expert (ACI and ACE 1995-2023)
James Gifford—NitroPress
Legend
December 21, 2024

I don't know if such usage needs to conform to the rule books. The italics set off the word,  and I assume there are several such entries to give the overall form a context. I'd use either space-emdash-space, or just an em space. And maybe make the key word semibold. None of those would make the form and sense hard to grasp and would add a little distinction.

 

Which, TBH, most mission statements can use. 🙂

Dave Creamer of IDEAS
Community Expert
Community Expert
December 21, 2024

Distinction would be the key. I don't think simple italics would do it. Bolditalics, color, size, case, and/or punctuation would help. As long as the first word stands off from the actual sentence. 

 

David Creamer: Community Expert (ACI and ACE 1995-2023)