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Bad choice of background! It makes the salad look blue which is bad! The bowl of salad most certainly does not look apertising! (The colour balance is wrong. ) The focus isn't good either and the composition could be improved.
There are blownout highlights and a blue tinge in the food, particularly noticeable in the egg. The focus is also not uniformly sharp, perhaps because the depth of field was too shallow.