Мандаринка на білому фоні

[Анатолій]

Мандаринка на білому фоні

[ricky336 · Accepted solution]

The background isn't white though. You have white balance issues! It will be/is rejected because of this!

[Анатолій]

Thank you, I will take it into account 🤗

[Marianne-Deiters · Accepted solution]

Besides the wrong white balance, it is badly focused. The edges are partly frayed and there is a hair on the left side.

in 200% view

[Анатолій]

Thanks 🤗

[Анатолій]

Почитав вашу критику зрозумів що треба змінювати, тому новий варіант цієї мандаринки, правда з'явилися артефакти по боках но їх я потім приберу.

After reading your criticism, I realized that it is necessary to change the new version of this mandarin, although artifacts appeared on the sides, but I will remove them later.

[Olexandr22522449d3x6]

Photo out of focus.

Фото не в фокусі. росія - країна терорист. Слава Україні.

[Анатолій]

Героям слава

С фокусом, так трішки тупонув но мандаринки вже немає😁🥲

[Olexandr22522449d3x6]

What camera and lens did you shoot with?

[Анатолій]

Canon 4000D KIT. EF-S 18-55 |||

Но це не в фотоапараті чи об'єктиві проблема. 

Бо фоткав лише с однією точкою фокуса (центральною), тому по баках розмито, а зернистість з'явилася після того, як додав різкості в фотошопі. 

Canon 4000D KIT. EF-S 18-55 |||

 But this is not a problem with the camera or the lens.

 Because I took photos with only one focus point (central), so the edges are blurred, and graininess appeared after I added sharpness in Photoshop.

[Abambo]

But this is not a problem with the camera or the lens.

 Because I took photos with only one focus point (central), so the edges are blurred, and graininess appeared after I added sharpness in Photoshop.

By @Анатолій

The lens is not great. You should look for a better lens. Sharpness is really dependent on your lens. For that reason, I use prime lenses, but a good zoom lens will help. You don't need to buy it new; however, you should be able to test it on your camera!

[Jill_C]

The Canon 18-55mm kit lens is notoriously a poor quality entry level lens. It's the first thing I replaced when I started my journey to become a better photographer. I actually replaced it with Canon's 18-55mm EF-S f 2.8 lens which is dramatically better! 

[Abambo]

Well, it does cost nothing, and it was good to start with… 😉

I did lend it out, but it never came back. And I can't remember who kept it… Lesson learned. When I lend out my gear now, I make a contract, even if it is a friend.

[Olexandr22522449d3x6]

Photo edges are pixelated and grainy.

[Olexandr22522449d3x6]

Also, this time the tangerine is overexposed. In addition, there are significant noises of brightness and color on the left in the background.